In this day and age, an increasing number of contemporaries are paying attention to whether it is more important for people to feel satisfied with what they do or to find a longer-term job which helps people break free from employment and have stable money. Personally, I believe both types of job could provide people a range of benefits, it depends on what benefits each individual wish to achieve and which job they prefer.
Those who support the idea of doing a passionate job claim that, without happiness and satisfaction, people, especially the youngsters would be easily bored then quit the job. For example, an officer of conflicting bossed would be always stressed and depressed, even afraid that the bosses would come down on him whenever he does not submit deadlines on time or fail to do business. As a result, the officer are under constant pressure and then leave the job despite the well-paid salaries. Therefore, satisfaction in job is the most influential factor to contribute to creating effective labor frequency.
On the other hand, in today's cut-throat labour market where thousands of new and talented candidates face unemployment, staying in the same job is a better choice than switching job to find satisfaction. Many people experience temporary unemployment after quitting their previous jobs to look for new ones that offer them higher level of satisfaction. For those who are the primary breadwinners, this is a risky decision. Therefore, it is observed that, nowadays, a growing number of people accept being insulted horribly to earn money to enhance their lifestyle, their living standard and stand in elite people.
From these above mentioned reasons, the conclusion can be drawn that although there are several opinions that a permanent job is more important than job satisfaction, I still believe people should find a job that offer them enough material needs and satisfaction.
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...ample, an officer of conflicting bossed would be always stressed and depressed, even afraid tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18006430868 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87565170559 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.73421576 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.454545455 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401708316434 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140116117829 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969695713176 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249045481537 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786037895059 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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