Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The necessity of prioritising the satisfaction of occupation over its security has become a matter of controversies for quite sometimes. Then, while several people, hold the belief that this is one of the most determining factors when choosing a job, there are numerous other, including me, inclinings towards a life-time and stable work as due to their argument, the demand of job satisfaction can not always be fulfilled. Both of the aforementioned statement will be addressed in this essay
To initiate, there is a variety of explanations for people to favouring job satisfaction over job security when seeking for a job. One fundamental justification is that only when employees enjoying their occupation will they accomplish their tasks excellently. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that people have the tendency to put every possible effort to complete their favourite activities, and their occupations are no exception. By the way of exemplifying, workers passionating with their job are more willing to receive additional shifts or work overtime when compared to the ones performing for merely the monetary purpose. Furthermore, when people are doing their enjoyable job, their negativity and distress from the workplace will, in some aspects, be diminished, thereby helping them to stick with the job for a longer time
Nevertheless, it is understandable for ones to claim that a life-long job is more vital for the employees. The first and foremost reason given by them is obviously due to financial stability. No one can live without paying the bills or affording the necessities as well as the daily expenses. Therefore, what people truly need, from my perspective, is a stable occupation to earn for living regardless of their boring and monotonous, or else they may fall into the bottom of the society. On the second place, a tiny proportion of jobs can offer the workers sufficient job satisfaction. Consequently, if one keeps a high expectancy about a dream job, they will not likely to have a suitable one and end up being unemployment
In conclusion, despite the advantageous impacts of job satisfaction on boosting productivity and reducing stress are undeniable, they cannot always be met and therefore, a fixed job is way more important for ones if they do not want to end up being unemployment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19893899204 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15209777239 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554376657825 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2446006778 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.333333333 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4166666667 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312647062881 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109788118729 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953626445325 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205504144977 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406455779521 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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