Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends and music. Other believe that the family still remains more important
It is socially believed that, the greatest influence on childhood developmental milestone is due to peers they interact with or entertainment media, while some still base on family upbringing. This essay agrees that family plays a crucial role in nurturing a child. The importance of family and positive traits which it reinforces, as well as, socialization of the young ones will be discussed in this essay.
The family tree is an important aspect in every child's life. Parents or guardian play a huge role in the child's upbringing, from the day a child is born. Babies are good observers of their surrounding, such as, how people interact and communicate with each other. They understand things that are acceptable to the family in the long run. For example, when i was growing up, my mother taught me to great anyone older than me and offer respect. I still have those attributes, as people from other backgrounds get amazed by my behaviour and they emalute me.
However, media and peers might contribute to the child's overall character, if parenteral guidance is not instituted. Children relate to their environment. Their behaviour, like, adults is controlled by what they see, watch and people they socialise with. Peer pressure can lead to positive or negative attitudes. For instance, my baby watches cartoons and she enjoys the rhymes, " if you are happy and you know clap your hands", as i watched her from a distance, whenever i play that particular song, she smiles and clap her hands too. Thus, when i realised that television or music play a huge role in defining a child's character if not controlled.
In conclusion, the role played by family in shaping the youngones' behaviour outwit that of peers or media. Children learn language from the mother. Personality of a person is determined by his or her background and cultural values not social. Therefore, i agree that family still plays a vital role in child's upbringing; as they are the ones who spend much time with the youngones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98816568047 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78338691949 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594674556213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0634627826 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7368421053 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175306283657 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527871522808 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445109163351 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10811145514 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564876493826 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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