Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Men are from Mars and women are from Venus. In other words, there are always differences in physical and mettle capabilities between them. This leads to gender-stereotype jobs. However, I partly agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why some jobs are suitable for men while others only appropriate to women. First, jobs require physical abilities have more demand on men rather than women. For instance, it is easy to find men in mechanical factories that involve handling heavy machines. Of course a few women have approved that they can do such jobs but these are exceptional situtations rather than rules. Therefore, this market has a tendency to recruit more men than women. Second, individuality is an important factor that influences on chosen jobs of a person. Despite lack of muscle power, women are more patient and careful than men. This could let them succeed in sectors like nursing and teaching which hardly saw men's participation.
On the other hand, gender is not a decisive factor for a person to be employed. When companies recruit someone, they will take into consideration experience and conmitment. It means that if women can prove their abilities, no difficulties can prevent them from move up career ladder on the sectors that considered men best-suited. Furthermore, employers nowadays show their preference for employing equal numbers of men and women to gain benifits from the strength of both genders. The decisiveness of men co-operating with the delicateness of women will result in sucessful business. For example, there are more and more women working in political or science sectors.
In conclusion, not gender, but the individual capabilities determine certain jobs suit for certain people. It means that if women can prove their talent, they can do men jobs and vice versa.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13907284768 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80433667686 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0647634283 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3789115514 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104102942148 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769402946328 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213044555586 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973860906403 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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