Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A popular belief has propagated for many centuries that men and women must seek out suitable jobs on the base of gender differences. While I partly agree that genders have some significant effects on both mental and physical traits, I believe that this trend is outdated nowadays for many reasons.
On the one hand, most researches indicate that there are many different characteristics between males and females, which effects on selected jobs. In terms of physical traits, men obviously have more advantages of muscle strength, which are appropriate to follow some certain careers than women. For example, the firefighter is one of the specified jobs that not only requires good physical but also decisive and analytical abilities, and therefore, this job is suitable for men rather than their gender counterparts. From a social perspective, women’s dispositions really suit to participate in certain vacancies regarding upbringing. For example, nursing and childcare occupations are special careers, which need to be patient and careful. These such dispositions are expressed particularly by women with their maternal instincts.
On the other hand, the point of view supposes that each gender must choose some particular jobs clearly is an old fashion in the modern life. Firstly, female students today obviously can approach fully to education opportunities and scholarships more than ever before. Consequently, they totally can be graduated from top-tier universities like males and they also have similar career prospects to get many honorable achievements in their own fields. Secondly, in our modern life, many companies gradually accept to offer women higher positions and even leaders if these females’ capacities are suitable. Likewise, societies are getting accustomed to male nurses or babysitters in the case of men.
In conclusion, although many viewpoints believed that job selections must be on the base of genders in the past, we nowadays have had many positive changes about this topic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...most researches indicate that there are many different characteristics between males and femal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, likewise, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90677381766 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7287594753 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285160083675 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895253892802 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762113474515 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172295681095 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102460684043 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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