Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, people have different views with regard to the question of whether mental or physical fitness is the key to achieve the games’ prize. While mental toughness is implied to be the most crucial factor, many opine that the victors had better have good physical health. From my perspective, mental power is undoubtedly a decisive element that gives a rise to the success in many sorts of sports.
Initially, mental prowess is expected to permit partakers to come closer to the first position in many sport competitions. People with concrete mental power tend to rarely lose their temperature, most of them could significantly remain the calmness which is a valuable factor that the winners are required to have. This accounts for the high win rate of strong-willed participants as they definitely able to decide the outcome of a match. Furthermore, possessing a strong mentality enables people to gain a sense of confidence which motivates them to entail and overcome intense pressure the audience place on.
Physical strength, on the other hand, performs as a catalyst for any individual to succeed in the sports field. As proven by some researchers, the more physical health is improved, the more wined rate that participants get. There are many instances indicating that physical fitness is more conducive to brute strength and stamina that produce persistent competence for the entrants. Additionally, physical toughness act as a deterrent for being injured during training or official competition. The participants, hence, could ensure the continuity of their performance. People with the strong physical health commonly get higher result than those who not have as they believe in themselves and are felt to ignore any pressure surround them
In conclusion, although the quoted benefits have accounted for the importance of physical power, people with a strong mentality are taken for granted to achieve more worthy prizes in the sport industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, in conclusion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30128205128 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82746084774 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1313477944 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.230769231 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320523798395 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936486633682 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569270426426 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190788213502 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331616693902 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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