Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Many people believe that mental toughness is the most crucial elements in determining sporting success, while others believe that physical fitness is the key. Both sides and my perspective regarding whether which is more essential will be mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, in order to achieve success in sport, physical strength is indispensable. Since there are various of sports categories, and some of them are sophisticated, muscular strength or key skills such as flexibility, agility could enhance their performance. For example, swimming competitors must have brute strength to adjust their body and their speed to maintain their position or take the lead. Therefore, they can earn gold medal and respect from their opponents. Additionally, having physical strength can help people prevent injuries. There are many hazardous sports such as synchronized swimming could lead to unexpected wound or even jeopardize lives of athletes. In other words, being in a good physical condition plays an essential role in achieving success.
On the other hand, I believe mental strength is as crucial as physical counterpart. Due to the intension of the game, many competitors might be stressed out. For example, goalkeeper of Liverpool , Loris Karius, because of anxiety, made two mistakes in the final match of Champion League against Real Madrid. If he had a clear mind and was not anxious, his team could win the Champion League. In addition, mental strength can help players turn the tables. Enemy team is taking the lead, contestants with strong mentality could stimulate their teammates and therefore can turn the tide. Thus, mental strength is vital for success in sport.
In conclusion, sports players have to face physical and mental difficulties on the field. Therefore, they should be trained to be physically fit and mentally resilient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ut. For example, goalkeeper of Liverpool , Loris Karius, because of anxiety, made ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33788395904 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78897461067 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1276332434 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244699487238 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789797778626 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705643259787 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152735742533 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474723594827 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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