Nowadays, mobile phones are ubiquitous and useful in numerous ways such as, at workplace or to communicate with family or friends. Whilst, some analyst believe that smartphone have either more utility in jobs or in daily life. I, however, in the opinion of both simultaneously and discuss it in following paragraphs.
To commence with, in today's world mobiles play vital role in every sphere of life. Firstly, cell phone keeps people connected to their kith and kin at all hours, as we live in nuclear family even though due to these gadgets we can able to stay in touch with our relatives. For instance, if the family members are living apart in different states due to work or any other reason, still they can know all about them due to advancement in technology like video calls on daily basis. Moreover, if both the parents are working, even then they can check the routines of their kids through camera connection to personal mobiles around the clock.
On the flip side, smartphone has proved to be asset for professional life too due to plethora of apps installed in it. There are umpteen factors to utilizing these at work area, such as conference calling, E-mail, data transfer from one place to other which saves a great amount of valuable time and cost for the companies. For instance, in case of emergency, the management of companies can fix instant meeting by simply conference call facilities available in these portable devices. In addition to this, cell phone with advanced features such as global positioning system, also helps to navigate with ease, making sure that employee of company are able to meet their new clients on time.
Hammering the final nail, I pen down saying , cell phone has revolutionized way of communication immensely and brought various benefits in workplaces as well as personal lives equally on day to day basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93312101911 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61462059709 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652866242038 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8766110834 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224182112679 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736798357663 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332275415335 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12217742898 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509570273155 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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