Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?
It is particularly significant that several people these days support the idea that wealthy people should consider lending others a hand as their primary priority. From my perspective, I found no justifications to disagree with this statement
In the first place, there seems to be a variety of explanations for supporting this message. Among them. the fundamental reason may lie in the fact that it can be a straightforward but effective means of transforming the world into a better place. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that there is a wide variety of citizens, mostly came from the lower segment of the society, are suffering from poverty and undernourishment. Therefore, salvation and assistance in every aspect from rich people allegedly provide these miserable people, especially children, a unique opportunity that changes their lives permanently. By the way of exemplification, numerous great people from the past, including well-known scientists and inventors, were unable to access higher education, thereby, accomplishing various sound achievement during their lifetime without the allowance from philanthropists.
Furthermore, helping people with insufficient finance is, in some particular perspective, synonymous with bringing back various advantageous impacts on the helpers. One could claim that monetary supports from rich people can be considered as an investment in the long term. An illustration of this is that many colossal companies and enterprises have the policies of offering internships or scholarships for undergraduates struggling with educational expenses. Notwithstanding, once these students attained their university qualifications as well as other relevant certifications, the acknowledgement will be the employment for these pre-mentioned companies as a means of repaying the debt. Additionally, besides the lucrative purposes, helping others also fulfil wealthy men with a sense of serenity and satisfaction when they receipt the gratitude and blessing from poor people
In conclusion, helping people can be an efficient means of making the world a better place through giving miserable people a life-changing opportunity. On the other hand, it can bring several benefits to the wealthy both in finance and mental perspective. Therefore, there is not a shadow of a doubt that the most important thing about being rich is the chance to make positive changes to other people
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...or supporting this message. Among them. the fundamental reason may lie in the fact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69337016575 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38716503425 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602209944751 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.828545519 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.538461538 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281559954964 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909322125738 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920399183083 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179688957621 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084514574535 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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