Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
The necessity of subjects related to art has been a matter of controversy for quite a long time since while several people, including me, support the idea that art plays a pivotal role for youngsters, numerous others considered it as a merely bootless errand. Two different standpoints will be addressed in this essay
On the one hand, there is a variety of beneficial impacts of art subjects on children at school. One fundamental benefit is that it is extremely advantageous to boost young people's mental abilities. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that participating in aesthetic courses not only offers children an opportunity to accomplish plenty of valuable knowledge but it also improves creativity and innovation of a child in leaps and bound. By the way of exemplifying, art classes are allegedly made a great contribution to developing emotional intelligence (EQ) of youngsters, which irrefutably essential for their future career path. The other advantage which is worth considering is that it allows people to discover potential talents in a more straightforward way. There seems to be evidence that teaching arts at school provide more chance for children to show their inherited capability, therefore, a more proper training schedule can be established
Nevertheless, one could claim that the art subjects is nothing more than a waste of time due to various reason. First and foremost, as the school time is limited, children should learn subjects that more relevant to their future occupations rather than arts, especially the academic ones including science or business. This, in some aspect, will have greater attribution for the fruitful profession of the child because they help children to pass university entrance examination with flying colours. Furthermore, for ordinary people except the ones working in relevant majors, arts often be misinterpreted as superfluous since they are of the mindset that art has no participation in the advancement of humankind and society and it is more like a hobby than a professional field
In conclusion, while several people hold the belief that art subjects are necessary as they boost children's EQ and help to discover hidden talents. On the other hand, besides the limited school time, numerous others consider arts as a waste of time due to their shortage of practical appliances
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02232757986 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2528298893 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.454545455 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0909090909 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29404138349 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106599484024 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517536512719 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186008086486 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381019200933 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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