More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, there seems to be a tendency among couples that their pregnant age has surged significantly when compared to the last few decades. From my perspective, this trend results from several reasons and whilst it has certain advantages, the disadvantages are much more considerable
On the one hand, there is a variety of interpretations for the increase in childbearing age. An explanation that is worth considering is that this is one of several consequences of late marriage. There seems to be evidence that several modern citizens are not excited with the idea of tieing the know, mostly due to financial challenges together with the daily negativity from the workplace. Furthermore, many modern parents are discouraged by the misconception that having children will deprive all the freedom of them and offer them nothing but the excruciating labour. Therefore, childbearing is being postponed to a particular period of life.
Consequently, it does not unreasonable to suggest that pregnancy later in life may have certain beneficial impacts on not only parents themselves but also the community as a whole. By way of illustration, giving birth in later age is synonymous with parents have financial stability and sufficient life experience, thereby, nurturing the child in a proper way. As a result, the number of juvenile criminals will definitely experience a dramatic decrease.
Nevertheless, the drawback of delayed childbirth should not be underestimated. It goes without saying that women at their later age often found it difficult to giving birth naturally as they are more vulnerable to female infertility. Additionally, the mortality rates among mature woman during their unsuccessful childbearing is also substantially greater because of the deterioration in their endurance
To summarize, the later child-giving is due to the financial difficulty as well as daily negativity and delay marriage. Moreover, many parents are scared of the responsibility of having children. Despite the advantageous impacts on parents and society, pregnancy later in life may have several hazards including the higher risk of difficult childbearing
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...are not excited with the idea of tieing the know, mostly due to financial challenges tog...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...xperience, thereby, nurturing the child in a proper way. As a result, the number of juvenile cr...
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Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he higher risk of difficult childbearing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59878419453 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27750070681 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6197220677 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198468553798 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602078763403 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440838903125 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106599662188 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026318924115 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
This is such a great essay!…
This is such a great essay! What have you done to improve your writing skills? I really like the way you develop your ideas and how you skillfully use the vocabulary in this essay. By the way, I think what you meant "tieing the know" was "tying the knot", right? I just learned that new phrase and loved it!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...are not excited with the idea of tieing the know, mostly due to financial challenges tog...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...xperience, thereby, nurturing the child in a proper way. As a result, the number of juvenile cr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he higher risk of difficult childbearing
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59878419453 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27750070681 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6197220677 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198468553798 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602078763403 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440838903125 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106599662188 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026318924115 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.