It is sometimes believed that children should be taken care by their mothers. Therefore, the authorities should help them to solve financial problems. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion for several reasons.
The first argument given to support my opinion is that mothers teach children a plethora of things such as discipline, patience,... The reason for this is that children are too young to distinguish between right and wrong, and therefore mother is a person who can lead them to go a right way. For example, there are many children who are likely to be hot-tempered and have aggressive behaviors , mothers will find a solution or give them advices how to control themselves. This can allow children not to fall prey to crime, and thus they become a well-mannered and respectful person. This is why I believe that mother is the only person that educate their children moral values in their life.
Another point behind my belief is that mothers can provide emotional supports to their offspring. This is because children need someone who they can share their feelings or thoughts with. This offers them with the opportunity to eliminate negative thinking, and therefore they may lead a optimistic life. This can be seen in Vietnam where a large number of student are under pressure from their bad performance in their exams, and therefore mothers may help them to have a strong motive to encounter this difficulty. For this reason, I think that the educational roles of mothers are undeniable.
In conclusion, I totally agree that mothers should take responsibility of raising their children given the aforementioned arguments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...refore they may lead a optimistic life. This can be seen in Vietnam where a large nu...
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...life. This can be seen in Vietnam where a large number of student are under pressure from their b...
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Suggestion:
...ren given the aforementioned arguments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13011152416 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77836043272 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2352632922 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299271970003 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116285952911 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697049748852 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216644036341 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429145884231 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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