some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
Museums have become popular all over the world. This essay will explore should museums focus on educating people or change to entertain them. Even though the entertainment purpose of museums attracts visitors, I believe the educational intention is the main reason why they make the decision to visit.
To begin with, people normally have fun and feel relaxed when they are visiting museums. The fact is that an increasing number of visitors think museums as tourist attractions where they want to visit during their trip. They enjoy wandering around in a magnificent building, appreciating amazing architecture, surrounding by priceless masterpieces and immersing in the history of a certain period. Some people even went to the Adelaide museum with a pretty costume and took photographs with the fantastic string arts. All those experiences can entertain people.
Conversely, I think the educational environment in museums is its unique feature and the most significant factor to attract people. Visitors of museums, either child for a school excursion or the elderly for killing time, want to gain knowledge and broaden their horizon by looking displays. If museums are not be considered as an educational place, it will lose its advantage. Fewer tourists and residents would not choose to go to museums, but to go to other places like bars, parks and playgrounds, when they intend to entertain themselves.
In conclusion, it is awesome that people enjoy visiting museums, but the top function for a museum is still education, not entertainment. Our society should not push museums transfer to playgrounds.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, look, so, still, as to, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3568627451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89810554728 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1958638421 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319926794453 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106387702994 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658065939199 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197315805107 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051571730754 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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