Over the past century, people have different prospect about how to use the museum effectively. In my opinion, If people master the optimization of combining in its entertainment and its education, the returns is highly adjustifiable.
In the one hand, people visit museums because those are toursist attracitions and also organizating some interesting exhibitions. In fact, museum is one of the most attractive destination for people visit and take some pictures when they visite a city or a nation. Such visiting not only make sense of world, but also help them enjoy their feeling as well as their memories at those places. Besides, by participating in some spectacular exhibitions in the museum, people are more likely to sastify their passon and getting more energy for their life. Even a small one like local art gallery also can be excellent source of relaxation and satisfaction.
On the other hand, museum is also an indispensable resource for education and researching. First, apparently it is a center that has many collections of specimens, so it is one of the best source for students in universities or colleges to be learnt from that, especially for archeological students who need to approach the items directory to find out and research. In addition, it also one of the most important fundamental specimens for researchers as weel as scholars extract as much knowledge as much as for human.
In conclusion, While museum is a outstanding place for people take pleasure in, it also a essential source for them to learn useful things from some collections or some exhibitions, by connecting both those of activities will help visitors are not only enjoyable but also to be learnt useful knowledge at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...anizating some interesting exhibitions. In fact, museum is one of the most attract...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'items'' or 'item's'?
Suggestion: items'; item's
...gical students who need to approach the items directory to find out and research. In ...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... human. In conclusion, While museum is a outstanding place for people take pleas...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ce for people take pleasure in, it also a essential source for them to learn usef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, if, so, well, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08070175439 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03442848535 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2926585871 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191697904592 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774926234829 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511632149014 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121926591041 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468695668289 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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