There has been a lot of advancement in the technology in last few years. Many people believes that these improved technology can make laborers life easier. Whereas, others argue that the technology is taking away the job opportunity from the labour market and these vacancies are filled in by automated machines. I believe, technology have surely affected the labour market to a great extent, however it can be solved if government intervenes and come up with new projects to support these workers.
In today's technological era, most of the work that was previously done by man has been replaced with automated machines. It is undeniable fact that machines are more productive and reliable than humans. During the time of manual work, a lot of errors were reported due to inefficiency of a labourer, but now with the machines this is not the case. Also, a machine can work 24*7 without a break and with the same efficiency. So, there are many advantages of having an automatic technology which can help to have huge production. For instance, in olden days when a toothpaste was produced manually, a company can only produce up to 1000 units a day, but now when they are produced by a machine the number of units have reaches 1,00,000 per day.
As due to the invention of new technologies, the labour market have crashed, and this have cost the workers their job. This can be said, as most of the work is done by automatic machines, company have laid off majority of man power in order to save their profits. This have affected the livelihood of many workers. However, to curb this situation, government can help these people to get jobs by introducing new plans where such workforce are needed. For instance, in India government have started projects like Metro rails and building fly overs to help labour class workers to earn their living.
In conclusion, the technology has a great impact on lives of people, at it helps to increase the production of items used daily and also allows a company to earn well by limiting the man power. On the other hand these workforce can be recruited by the government for other projects that can help the overall development of a city and allow them to earn their livelihood.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...miting the man power. On the other hand these workforce can be recruited by the government for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7890625 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64007406112 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518229166667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.964029866 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.176470588 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122004373327 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422558626687 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437356053075 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794300170028 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037416211705 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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