Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is supposed by some people that local households should construct their new houses having the same features as others in a community. However, some also believe that house owners are able to design their new accommodations according to their preferences. In my point of view, I lean towards the second statement.
On the one hand, there are some main reasons why people should build old-style houses. Initially, building an ancient-style house helps to maintain the beauty of the nostalgia. This allows these areas to preserve traditional and cultural values, which might create a unique feature to attract tourists. As a result, indigenous residents could enrich their budgets in this way. Secondly, instead of being judged or causing a controversial topic to other dwellers, building a similar architectural form is also a way to socialize with surrounding neighbors. Therefore, those families would not feel isolated in their communities.
On the other hand, I believe that people should be permitted to freely design their own houses. The most significant reason is that as they have been saving much money to construct their dream houses, they need to be comfortable and relaxed in their own houses. By contrast, following to the other ideas which might make them upset and pressure whenever they return their own house. Furthermore, allowing landowners to create new-style houses also reinforces the diversity of their home countries’ architecture which individuals could bring their groundbreaking ideas to the international market. This might help to enhance the development of this potential industry, and create profits and positions for their nations.
In conclusion, although it is true when some people advocate the importance of keeping traditional features in constructing houses, I believe that landowners have the right to create and design their new houses.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45733788396 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93667711868 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6350011371 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30098220297 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104266974266 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852429773253 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185843580316 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657928796616 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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