Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People's opinions differ whether newly constructed houses in the local neighborhoods should reflect the old buildings' style, or they should be allowed to create their own dwellings. This essay will discuss both views of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why I am more inclined towards the latter.
On one hand, it is believed that the style of historic houses in the local districts should be the same since historic buildings are part of a country's heritage, hence, they should be protected. Moreover, they give character to cities, attract tourists, and they show us how people lived and thoughts in the past. Take Venice, for example, Venetian Gothic is the term used for the particular form of Italian Gothic architecture typical of Venice, originating in local building requirements, with some influence from Byzantine architecture, and some from Islamic architecture, reflecting Venice's trading network. Because of this, new ones should be designed to complement them.
On the other hand, it is argued that individuals should be able to design and build their own homes. Modern architecture is usually more environmentally friendly due to the fact that people have already been aware of the global warming effects. They use less energy and produce less waste as some modern glass buildings take advantage of natural light. Furthermore, individuals can show their characteristics through the designs of their houses and can make them feel more comfortable and relax while being at home with families or working at home as a freelancer.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to learn and remember about the past and old, historic architecture. However, I personally believe that the owners should be allowed to decide the way their own house will be built.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1744966443 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81230477554 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8365249845 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339535914809 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118904963144 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10283355655 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22273395054 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793523736682 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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