Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the public is being bombarded with a huge amount of information which is usually considered to be irrelevant to people's lives. Hence, it is argued that reading the news in newspapers and watching television news programs are wasting time. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea due to several reasons which will be mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, there are some explanations for why people refuse to obtain the news. the most popular one is that the information from the news does not directly connect with their lives. It is obvious that we can not recognize any relationship between a worker's life and a report about the status of the war in the Middle East or the change political system of a country in the all the side of the world. However, I believe that it is just a lack of the perspective of how crucial information could be in one's life.
On the other hand, staying up-to-date with the news animals people to gain enormous benefits in comparison with those who do not pay attention to the new information. Frequently reading news reports articles, regardless of the media used is a newspaper or a television program, citizens can understand the policies of the country clearly and thus can behave more appropriately. In addition, people who are being connected with the news can have great opportunity to broaden the Horizons in various features of their lives. They could accumulate not only a lot of solutions for tackling many issues which are often indicated in newspapers or programs on TV but also knowledge about the urgent phenomenon to share with their friends or relatives to strengthen the bonds among them.
In conclusion, I want to reaffirm that acquiring news plays a vital role in people's lives. Although the advantages of this are depended on an individual's judgments, there is no waste of time in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.840625 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75828121017 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3344953953 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324120916295 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123560673848 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112039499309 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198206687771 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379198454772 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.