It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than living with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays due to the ascending of the number and the variety of universities and colleges, high school graduates have more options for tertiary education than before. It leads to an argument that students should study at the universities which are far from the house rather than staying with parents. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea as several reasons which will be mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, it is not difficult to understand why living away from home could be considered as a great challenge for the freshman. One of the most common problems that a person may suffer from is homesick. Many Vietnamese students express their anxiety that staying in a new area which often results in insomnia and inefficient studying. Moreover, financial management is one other issue that statement usually struggle with. The lack of parents' care and restriction provokes the situation that those who live away from home excessively spend their money for inappropriate purposes such as parties or traveling. Hence, the consequence is that they have to face the shortage of necessary things like food or house rental fee.
On the other hand, from a more positive view, living far from home offers opportunities to learn the knowledge that people hardly gain when staying with family. After suffering from various difficulties students can become more independent and not in some skills including cooking skills or financial management which is what their parents often do for them. Furthermore, because college life happens in the new area or even another country it allows the students to acquire new cultures, traditions or maybe a language which ultimately would become valuable experiences and precious memories.
In conclusion, I want to reaffirm that living away from parents has both advantages and disadvantages. However, the benefits may eclipse the drawbacks to some extent, thus this trend should be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74706226446 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3379875824 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321576069816 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936386131816 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750022142185 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172138484925 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338238498437 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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