Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, news is an important part of everyone's lives, although certain people believe that it has no relevance. Therefore, they suggested that watching and reading news is a waste of time. Having said, I still believe that news is a significant factor in the daily routines of a person, and some reasons will be discussed in the next paragraph.
First and foremost, news is everywhere and it readily available to everyone, from students to senior citizens and also from poor to well off citizens. News can be learned from the newspapers and watching news programs from the television, and also other media like radio and smart mobile phones. There are lots of scenarios that portray the relevance of news on people's lives. Firstly, in our general knowledge, it gives us information on general happenings around us, not only locally but also international events, we gain awareness of an outbreak of war that might affect our way of communicating and dealing with the issues. Secondly, it provides information and prevention of some diseases, and ways to keep a healthy lifestyle, in the health news. Lastly, in leisure and travel news, it shows the sites in a particular place for tourists to visit and activities that are available for a traveler, therefore, promoting tourism.
While specific individuals believe that news is not connected in our lives, it is still evident that a majority's daily lives are affected by the news from the paper or television. An example of this is the news on coronavirus, which always discussed in the news. That is why everyone is aware of it. It shows a noticeable change in their everyday habits like wearing a mask, sanitizing or washing the hands now and then and avoiding handshaking with friends that is usually a normal routine when meeting a friend or a colleague. Another instance is when travelling to a different place, awareness of the culture, tradition, do's and don'ts, and what to expect are also provided by travel news. Furthermore, these pieces of knowledge will affect the way the traveler will visit a particular area.
In Conclusion, the news plays a vital role in our lives, and it affects us in how we go through the day. Although some believe otherwise, I strongly agree that our activities are always affected by the happenings around us, which is usually seen in the news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding happenings'?
Suggestion: the surrounding happenings
...t our activities are always affected by the happenings around us, which is usually seen in the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93670886076 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77125122644 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529113924051 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.939540677 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.705882353 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32146128659 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111176557744 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827105934334 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199896599055 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571232931447 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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