Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read
the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary society, there are a large number of people having statement that following the mass media wastes their time because it does not relate to life. In my own point of view, I totally disagree with them and in this essay, I will explain in more details.
In my perspective, although more untrustworthy resources are published, there are plenty of reliable newspapers. They provide us numerous helpful news such as social events, stock market,etc. Indeed, in the COVID-19 epidemic's quarantine time, citizens had to stay at their home to lower the spread speed of the virus. They caught the news by reading online news and watching TV programs. Moreover, they are taught some methods in order to keep the virus at bay and cure by themselves.
An another merit to conclude that people should approach to the media is connecting to the world as it is a mirror to reflect our daily lives. Foreigners can update the newest events of other nations, predicting what will happen to have the best preparations. For instance, when stock market of a giant economy fluctuates, stocks' owners of other countries can get information to consider whether keep or sell their stocks to gain profits. Furthermore, it is an ideal way to entertain because more humorous stories are shared on the Internet.
In conclusion, newspapers and TV information channels bring us various worthy news in our lives from all around the world. Therefore, it is necessary to our development and it gives us an array of benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In the contemporary society, there are a large number of people having statement that following ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...essay, I will explain in more details. In my perspective, although more untrustwo...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...news such as social events, stock market,etc. Indeed, in the COVID-19 epidemics qua...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...such as social events, stock market,etc. Indeed, in the COVID-19 epidemics quaran...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a merit' or 'another merit'.
Suggestion: A merit; Another merit
... virus at bay and cure by themselves. An another merit to conclude that people should approach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95275590551 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76110869895 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9052761624 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167210971659 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513355089042 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595383205758 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859580361373 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280893705674 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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