Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is great concern about how to learn current affairs in the best way. When this issue comes into view, there exist many conflicting opinions. Some people strongly believe that learning from a newspaper is the best method. Nevertheless, others share the view that using a different medium is the best measure for this purpose. Both of the views have their own merits which require careful consideration.
On the one hand, some people are of the view that learning through a newspaper is the most suitable way. One explanation to support this view is that almost all newspapers give consumers accurate information. This is because newspapers usually have to experience a wide range of censoring processes before being printed. In fact, in Vietnam, the contents of a newspaper are always inspected seriously by many organizations prior to being printed out. Besides, there are also many rigorous laws issued by the government to ensure the precise news being printed. Therefore, newspapers may be the best choice which cannot be overlooked when people search for exact news.
On the other hand, some people argue that the most preeminent to get news is using other mediums. The most frequent factor contributing to this view is that the media allows people to update new information immediately, which newspapers cannot cater to. In reality, according to the statistics published recently in Vietnam, an average newspaper requires more or less 4 hours to be produced and given to the readers. This means that people are not able to update news in the fastest way. Meanwhile, the media enables people to revise news whenever they want. For this reason, the media is considered as the most superlative choice for this purpose.
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that both newspapers and other mediums bring their particular benefits which cannot be denied. However, from my perspective, I am convinced that modern media are better than a newspaper to gain news in this day and age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...less, others share the view that using a different medium is the best measure for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in fact, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10334346505 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69201749189 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0048472259 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3684210526 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351953997182 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113974838296 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823808183845 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214722139368 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400280861484 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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