Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Living in society peacefully is the good way of human life.It is necessary to learn and teach our children about society and ts importance .It is the duty of parents to show the the path if living sociably but schools are also responsible to provide knowledge on this topic.This essay will discuss the guardians responsibility towards their children then follow the school duties towards student.

To begin with , the responsibilty of guardian to their son and daughter plays a vital role to make them civilized and sociable person. Father and mother have more knowledge and experience about society's rules and regulations ,duties and others which should be provided so that they can live safely and society also have security.For instance ,my colony has rule of fix entry and exit time . Also, visitors have to register their name at entrance gate.Such kinds of rules are needed for the security purpose. Additionally, everyone need to follow the community's living style and have good bonding with each other so that there will be peace and prosperity in families.

However, some people thinks that school is the best source to teach student about manner and norms to be a good person within the colony. This is true , educational institutions have different techniques ,ideas to make pupil eligible to stay nicely in society.Lecturer's experience and teaching style helps students to go to right direction as well as creates positive thinking in mind to become independent. Take an example of some institutions which are nowadays organizing and implementing clean environment programmes . Programmes like this will not only make environment healthy but also spread positive messsage to the world on preservation of environment and nature. This type of actions are also the subject to teach children which is related to society. Moreover , others qualities like good behaviour , respecting others , etc should be taught to give the best definition of discipline people.

In conclusion , it is the best way to give and take skills on colonies member's quality ; it may be via school or parent but it should be mandatory among all societies. It has been said that positive habits should be taken and negative should be ignored to live happily among people.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17534246575 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80796660017 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583561643836 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6104424822 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.307692308 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243145405622 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845337223465 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693522553319 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143411795998 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670113799642 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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