There is a debate whether it is parents' responsibility or school's responsibility to educate children in being good society members. I completely agree with both views and because of several reasons.
On the one side, children usually learn their foundation of habits and behaviors from the family. Therefore, it is parents' responsibilities to educate and ensure them to behave properly. If children are used to behave nicely in the family, they will more likely to act properly in other communities. For example, Anthony has always been taught to say thank you after receiving his favorite toys from his parents. As a result, when he goes to public places and receives favor from other people, he always says thank you.
On the other side, parents have trusted school to teach their children, where their children will spend most of their time there. Therefore, school should make sure that their children are well-educated and can behave properly wherever they are, including in the society. For instance, Anthony is being taught about respecting older people through Civilization lecture which is taught in the school. Consequently, when Anthony meets older people in his neighborhood, he can behave politely and respect them.
In conclusion, I completely agree that it is both parents and school's responsibilities in teaching children to be good society members because children begin learn the foundation of their habits and behaviors from family. Moreover, because parents have trusted school to teach their children, school also have the same responsibility as parents in educating children to be good society members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3579766537 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84973701856 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5953226349 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261834958216 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982801812264 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795684648612 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179553038206 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807551835272 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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