Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good
members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn
this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A part of people believe that childrens should learn the basic human behaviour at
family, while, remaining part believe that school is the right place for that. This
eassy will discuss both views and provide opinion on that.

By nature, humans like to follow others and childrens are more inclined to that
nature. family is the right place where they spend most of the time, so if parents
set examples of good behaviour to follow then it would be more effective. For example,
kids learn the importance of throwing the trash to bin, doing simple household works
or helping the elderly people of family at home. So, to become a sensible member of
the community, family is the right place where young members can learn the basic norms
of attitude which helps them to be a important part of society.

On the other hand, at schools, childrens learn social behaviours like communicating
with each other, co-operation etc. at school, children get the chance to interect with others,
which dewvelops their communication skill. Additionally, this institutions encourages
the young people to be more co-operative. For instance, schools organizes different group
programs which helps them to be more co-operative to each other. So, besides family,
schools helps children to develop social behaviour which finally make them a good member
of society.

To conclude, It is not only the family that makes a children social but also the schools
that makes the children a important part of society.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59335003226 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1503009585 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268624354783 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102927831644 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458450156244 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849718393645 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430327528006 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments