Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other
people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your
own opinion.
While it can not be denied that physical fitness is essential for being successful in sports, it is also true that without mental power one can not achieve the goal in any aspect including sports. It has been believed that with mental strength a person can overcome his or her external disabilities, while some others give emphasis on muscle power.
Firstly, body strength plays a significant role in how well a player perform in sports, it is also mandatory to improve physical energy to keep the higher level of performance. For that purpose a player or athlete has to go through some sort of tough skill development training. However, some have argued for mental strength over physical strength.
When it comes to sports, having psychological strength is nearly as important for players as physical fitness. Furthermore, with sports psychology- a growing field of study, more athletes are looking to improve their mental power as well as their physical exercise routine. Many sports psychologists have said that mental toughness is the ability to consistently perform toward the upper range of one's talent and skill regardless of competitive circumstances.
As we know, world sport is packed with examples of those who have come so close to glory yet mentally collapsed at the final moment. On the other hand, have some examples of those who have won the game by their profound mental strength in spite of having physical shortcomings.
From above discussion we can easily realise that, our physical capacities are often influenced by our mental factors. Though, body fitness is mandatory for sports, in my opinion mental stamina is more effective in sports for success.
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also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, as to, sort of, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16058394161 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7215903779 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1780895939 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288638797756 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114686657496 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690794034516 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158713298502 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277096414213 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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