Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has always been a controversial issue about whether physical strength or mental strength is considered more important for success in sport. For some people, it is reasonable that physical strength is important for success in sport while others believe that mental strength is an essential element for success in sport.
It is undeniable that most sports require physical strength. Without energy, strength, power, speed, reflection or flexibility, sport cannot be played successfully. For example, it required a great energy and power for weightlifting; speed, energy and flexibility to play soccer or speed, energy and reflection to play tennis. These sport games can't be played successfully only with mental strength. In addition, not only does it require physical energy, but sport requires a lot of it. For instance, a soccer game lasts 90 minutes, you can't win the game by just simply standing or walking around the field. You have to run, use your power to take your opponent's ball and control the ball using your flexibility for the whole game. It's the same for tennis, baseball, basketball, etc. Therefore, the importance of physical strength is undeniable.
In the meantime, it is not considered that playing a sport without mental strength is a real challenge. Although mental strength is not directly responsible for the success of a sports game, but its importance is undeniable. In all sports games, beyond physical strength, it is imperative the need for strategy, calm-mind and acute thought. Without it, you will easily become unstable, panic and no matter how great your physical power is, your fall has been expected. For example, without a good strategy, a plan, a soccer team will play without a proper order and therefore, can't use all of their physical strength; or when a team is being leaded, a cold head and acute thoughts are important, because they will build a plan or a strategy to counter and take back the game. Without mental strength and skill, the team will easily panic and lose the game by themselves. Therefore, the importance of mental strength is undeniable.
In conclusion, both physical and mental strength are undeniably important for success in sport. In my view, it is reasonable that physical and mental strength are important to success in sport. Ones cannot play a successful sports game without physical or mental strength. You need to train and improve your ability and strength for physical and mental strength to achieve success in sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13235294118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73757284377 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426470588235 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1153430698 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403042248662 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179667333353 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127079603656 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332071280384 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120935029761 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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