Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It has always been a controversial issue over whether physical strenght or mental strenght is deemed to be more important for success in sport. To some people, it is reasonable that physical strenght is important for success in sport while others believe mental strenght is an indispensable part for succeeding in sport.
It is an undeniable fact that most of sport games require physical strenght. Without energy, resistance, power, speed, reflex ability or flexibility, sport can't be played in success. For example, it required a great energy and power to weightlifting; speed, energy and flexibility to play soccer or speed, energy and reflex to play tennis. These sport games can't be played in success only with mental strenght. Also, not only requires physical energy, sport requires lots of it. For instance, a soccer game is 90-minute long, you cannot win the game by just standing around or walking around the field. You must run, use your power to take the ball from your opponent and control the ball using your flexibility for the whole match. It is the same for tennis, baseball, basketball,... Hence, the importance of the physical strenght is undeniable.
Meanwhile, it is no considered that playing a sport without mental strenght is a real challenge. Despite mental strenght isn't directly account for the success of a sport games, but its importance is undeniable. In every sport games, other than physical strenght, the need of stradergy, calm-mind and sharp thinking is imperative. Without it, you will easily become unstable, panic and no matter how great your physical power is, your downfall has been expected. For example, without a good stradergy, a plan, a soccer team will play without a right order and therefore, can't use all of their physical strenght; or when a team is being leaded, a cold head and sharp thinkings are important, due to the fact that they will build a plan or a stradergy to counter and take back the game. Without mental strenght and skill, the team will easily fall in panic and lose the game by themselve. Therefore, the importance of mental strenght is undeniable.
In conclusion, both of the physical strenght and mental strenght are undeniably important for success in sport. In my opinion, it is reasonable that both physical and mental strenght are important for success in sport. Ones cannot play a sport game in success without either physical or mental strenght. You need to train and improve your skill and strenght for both of physical and mental strenght so as to gain the success in sport.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d, reflex ability or flexibility, sport cant be played in success. For example, it r...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eflex to play tennis. These sport games cant be played in success only with mental s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...he same for tennis, baseball, basketball,... Hence, the importance of the physical...
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Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...nght is undeniable. Meanwhile, it is no considered that playing a sport without...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...real challenge. Despite mental strenght isnt directly account for the success of a s...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ay without a right order and therefore, cant use all of their physical strenght; or ...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...or both of physical and mental strenght so as to gain the success in sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99765807963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68249779414 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423887587822 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2221097474 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276801306508 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116766530113 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855575394478 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215645231209 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673961632014 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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