Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There have been many arguments on advertising whether it is extremely effective in interesting people to buy products or its appearance is so common that we no longer get attracted to it anymore. Both sides of the arguement will be discussed in the following paragraphs of this essay and to my concern, advertising still plays an important role in hooking us into purchase products.
It is undoubtedly that advertising has been appearing so often that it becomes common or even annoying for a part of us. This is a result of unquality advertisement showing up or not a right place nor a right time. For instance, many websites on the net trying to put as many as advertisements as possible that sometime they cover the company of the site themselves, causing annoyance to the visitors. Consequently, advertisements become uneffecttive as it appears times over times, causing a boring experience toward both the advertisements and the product.
On the other hand, money experienced advertising companies know how to attract their viewers at ease. Some have created short yet fluence and meaningful advertisements that people like to watch constantly, like the ones for Google or Microsoft. Futhermore, they don't make mistakes that other unquality advertisements did, because they understand that quality are over quantity, and they ensure that the advertisements would appear in such a way that it would attract people, not annoy them. As a result, the fact that consumers got attracted to an up-to-date product, or a beautiful performance of the advertisements are unevitably.
In conclusion, advertising are still effectively persuading consumers to buy products, as long as it must be quality and does not cause any annoyance nor boredom to viewers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, still, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25266903915 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21839248332 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6844432094 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.181818182 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273284335322 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103306698457 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571770094071 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162058063627 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610368783531 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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