Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
To be an athlete requires several elements, but there are physical strength and mental strength which is important to the success of sport players. There is an argument compare both of strengths to decide whether physical and mental power is more significant, and therefore I will discuss both views of statements in the essay.
It is obvious that physical strength is required in all of the athletes significantly. In order to strengthen their health, endurance or flexibility, sport players will spend numerous time to enhance their skills and play hard in practice matches. Otherwise, their strength is barely enough to compare with opponents. Some of the physical abilities that is common in sport competition are endurance, which helps players to maintain breath in long-time match. In addition, flexibility will let the athlete flex their body in any sort of terrains without being injured. For example, Marathon runners in a race are able to run 30 kilometers straight without a minute of break or injury because of their impressive endurance and good body flexibility, which has been trained hardly before.
However, having a vigorous strength solely does not lead to good result. In many cases, athletes lose matches because of the mental health and psychology are unstable. According to psychology research, people tend to show meek performance in front of something is difficult to accomplish, so do athletes, they are less brave and show tiny motivation after a lose. Take famous football players in the world as an instance. Their physical strength is on the top when compare with others but they still fail, even play against a tier two clubs. That is because their mental health is not remain stable in every game.
In summary, we can not decide whether the physical or mental is more vital. The more we train and learn to supervise both of these skills, the more success we will achieve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in summary, sort of, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09841269841 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65151401675 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1017395086 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254221207191 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780384620376 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743759531837 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161737541393 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997372150382 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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