Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought that whether physical power or mental strength plays a vital role in taking part in the sport game is a controversial issue. My view is that stamina is a key factor for the success of the athletes.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why accelerating the spirit is a necessity of sport participants. Firstly, if the players suffered from the injuries when competing the game, the strong will would help them overcome their pain and then defeat their opponents. For instance, in the football game between Thailand and Vietnam, despite the Vietnamese player bleeding in his head, he still made a great effort to participate in the game until the end. Secondly, fostering a competitive spirit among athletes is key factor that can motivate them to practice intensively. Therefore, a win-at-all-costs attitude that may release participants’ tiredness and move forward.
On the other hand, I believe that physical state is more essential for players to reach the success. The first reason is that the strong power will lead to the good performance in the sport contest. Take Lance Armstrong for this illustration, the well-known cyclist was the statue for most young people in Tour de France, but the desire of winning the game that made him rely heavily on performing-enhancing drugs. Furthermore, there is a need to maintain and rise the endurance because this is a basic element to be chosen in any sport contest. For instance, the twins Quoc Co and Quoc Nghiep must spend most of their time practicing to break the Guinness World Record on the apparatus.
In conclusion, while the spirit is important for sport players, I am convinced that without physical power, the contests hardly achieve any outstanding performance during their career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07876712329 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93463178406 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3668092613 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174156993138 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567182045139 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562628114244 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114501222656 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587767927969 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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