Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity what are the primary cause of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Despite knowing the serious repercussion of overuse of natural species, this problem has been increasing all over the world. In the scope of this essay, I will examine the major causes as well as recommend potential solutions for this issue.
It is true that there are two main reasons why ecosystem is dying out. The first factor is that when human artificially transform the environment, this destroys vegetation and animal’s natural habit. Take the big cities for this obvious example, to have a wider roads or skyscrapers, people are willing to cement the soils or cut down the trees. Because of that, numerous species are in the brink of extinction. The second reason is that human activities associated with capturing or harvesting a natural resources are too intense. This overexploitation will render animals exhausted in a short time. For instance, too frequent fishing does not leave enough time for fish to reproduce and makes them vanish. In other words, activities from human often deplete local flora and fauna and cause loss of bio-diversity.
Some possible measures to tackle this problem are protecting natural areas and promoting public’s awareness. In terms of preserving natural habitats, the government should impose stricter laws on environmental protections, and ensures the exploitation that not to negatively impact on the resources. Therefore, we are able to save untouched environment and prevent species from dying out. Furthermore, the next step in fighting bio-diversity is that warning community of the dangers of this problem. This way is the best way for people to help people more conscious of environmental preservation and they will not dwindle ecosystem.
In conclusion, people’s activities that changing the environment adversely affect the world’s natural resources. However, the possible solution such as conserving natural space and raising public’s consciousness can significantly lesson the extinction of species.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resource'?
Suggestion: resource
... with capturing or harvesting a natural resources are too intense. This overexploitation ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other words, activities from human often deplete local flora and fauna and cause ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54966887417 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04029053201 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8336310344 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5882352941 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126537364822 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387774992918 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460953296756 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717726182779 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158751493662 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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