Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
People have different opinions as to whether physical or mental fitness is more crucial to career development in sport. Personally, I concur with the view that a combination of both produces the best athletes in the world.
Advocates of the ‘physical’ side may believe that maintaining good physical shape often results in a player’s career lasting longer and their better agility. One fundamental reason is that world-class players possessing physical advantages tend to exhibit spectacular performance even when being in their 30s. Another reason is the acceleration and speed of a player are one of the decisive factors with regards to success in many sports, such as tennis and badminton. In fact, agile players tend to play more aggressively and outplay their opponents. Perhaps the best example of this would be Lin Dan, currently one of the oldest and fastest players, who has still emerged victorious in most of the badminton tournaments in which he has partaken in recent years even though he has already been over 35.
People who think that mental fitness is of greater importance may be attributed to a player’s beneficial impact on themselves and their team as a whole. On an individual level, players capable of maintaining their composure under the pressure of frustration during sports matches tend to regain the advantage and win the matches. On a team level, an occasional burst of motivation from these individuals would recover the courage and determination of the whole team. I, however, hold a view that a blend of exceptionally good physical and mental shape would provide the optimum conditions for sports professionals to vault to the top. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo has been arguably one of the brilliant soccer players due to his endless stamina on the court and his incredible source of inner aspiration.
In conclusion, there are various ideas about whether success in sport is attributed to either excellent mental or physical shape, but I am convinced that the amalgamation of both is conducive to the career advancement of an athlete.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
People have different opinions as to whether physical or mental fitness is more cruc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20178041543 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92707973744 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4857533208 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.846153846 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178908733949 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641995152406 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666257197692 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121370334816 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585337938843 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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