Some people think that private health care is better for people. Other say that health care should be free of charge and run by the government. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of private health service.
With development of techonogicial advances on the health system, the issue of whether private healtcare system should be established has become debated issue all over the world. This essay is of opinion that all countries should focus on state health system instead of paying attention private ones and will explain both advantages and disadvantages of this topic in forthcoming paragraphs deeply with examples.
There is no doubt that private healtcare system is much more benefit in compared to state ones. As we know and experienced that state hospitals are often small and limited in terms of numbers of room, personal, conditions and so on. However, when we look at the conditions of private system , we can not say same things. For example , according to World Health Service , patients are waiting more than 75 minutes in the states services, while these times are remaining under half an hour in private ones as they have shorter waiting lists for operations and appoinments.
On the other hand, private system has some negative sides as well. Though state services are paid the government using money from taxes and budget, one should pay themselves all prices of the treatment in such system. In addition to that private system can be considered as unfair since only wealth peope afford it. National Healtgh Service, for example, in the UK provides free health care for every resident without looking that they have insuruance.
In conclusion, two system has both pros and cons but improving state health service by governments should be first and foremost duty for all countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15769230769 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58955181455 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.751070108 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.909090909 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274706502547 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102597932259 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614500759484 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169698173546 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043742344598 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.