Some people think that a programmer of international exchange visit would benefit all teenager school students. Do you think the benefits of such a programmer would outweigh any disadvantages.
A hotly debatable issue today relates to that all teenager school students more prefer to go to developed country rather than own place. But, some teachers opine that they loss to the tradition and culture. In this essay, i am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On the one hand, there are numerous stunning benefits if students migrate for international programme. These include enhanced diligent, self discipline and more responsive. Firstly, now in this era majority of parents wants to that their children settle abroad for longtime, with are getting of huge salary package and live to luxurious lifestyle. Moreover, when students poor country to shift in rich country then get a more opportunities and gain a knowledge. Thus, they chance to work in big industry with professional staff and learn to smart work during nuisances. For instance, every year in the world almost one hundred thousand student each nations from migrate to developed country for better life then they away to the bad financial condition own country and home.
On the other hand, there are couple of drawbacks to doing the study abroad for students. Secondly, they always miss to the family and home places with which they fell isolate in stranger country and find it like new friends who are same family with which they share problem and take it suggestion. Since, they along with new friends to go club where they use to the narcotics substance such as alcohol and drugs then day by day they think that friends is most crucial than parents. In additionally, it commence that they face the difficulty like public communication and more spend money on food, with buy from a restaurants in daily routine which are directly impact on pocket money and health.
In conclusion, it can be seen that whereas the students for higher education migrate to other country has some advantages such as better working environment and earning huge money, however, far away from parents they choose to bad company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'narcotics'' or 'narcotic's'?
Suggestion: narcotics'; narcotic's
...riends to go club where they use to the narcotics substance such as alcohol and drugs the...
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Suggestion: commences
...ucial than parents. In additionally, it commence that they face the difficulty like publ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a restaurant' or simply 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: a restaurant; restaurants
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97014925373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50208022164 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0119621725 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0608592801935 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246140902856 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317207478633 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391291143788 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131822751223 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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