Many things that used to be done in the hone by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages
It is universal truth that in now people do not lives without modern technology , with use in daily routine, but ,if individual to doing the daily work by own hands then ,more beneficial for health. I shall to highlight the positive and negative development.
On the one hand ,there are numerous stunning benefits of golden invention. These include enchanced safe time and money , free stressful and more convenient. Firstly ,in 21st century people more busy in position or official work. So ,it is boon invention for especially women to owing that at least 12 to 14 hours to spend on home work in the early years such as cooking ,washing and cleaning. Thus ,they more safe the money and time because it is one time investment and repair is very cheaper ,with no kept the servant for household work.
On the other hand ,there are couple of drawbacks if individual depends on technology. Secondly ,people more like to lives sedentary and luxurious lifestyle so , they more use the gadgets or machines in daily routine with which their impact on health and become more lethargic ,obesity to owing technology along with they no need movement the body parts. So ,they lose talent or ability for practical work.
In concluded ,it can be seen that whereas the technology has brought some disadvantages such as they loss the skills , overlook health nuisance ,it's advantages of automation like more convenient and unstressfull.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, at least, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67284631793 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.765527126 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114915107829 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410163635476 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369802513936 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806362118602 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300064858666 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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