Some people think that robots are very important for humans’ future development. Other, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that whether the invention of robots could benefit individuals’ future. While a group of commentators indicate that this development could bring disadvantages to the society, I believe that robots will lead to positive influence on individuals’ lives.
There are a variety of reasons elucidating why robots are the negative development. It is evident that inventing robots could increase the unemployment or underemployment rate. Labourers state that their jobs will be replaced by automatic machinery as the robots can constantly work, with them considering themselves less productive and competitive. Taiwanese blue-collar workers, in particular, are aware that their employers are prone to importing automatic machinery to substitute for labourers. In addition, psychologists demonstrate that individuals who have heavy dependence on machines become indolent, developing an aimless future. For instance, statistics show that people in the U.S. have less awareness of future plans as they heavily rely on advanced technological machines.
However, the use of robots can be rather beneficial to the world. Firstly, the effectiveness of productivity can be maximised by utilising robots. This is predominantly because the artificial intelligence machines are able to do effective and efficient calculation, avoiding excessive and unnecessary errors and expenditure. When the robotic arms were invented, Apple company argued that manufacturing an iPhone costs them less than before, and its accuracy has remarkably been improved. Besides, the issue of safety in workplace can be tackled by introducing latest robots. They equip with the innovative alarming system, protecting workers from danger at work.
In conclusion, although the development of robots might have negative impacts on the society, I regard this invention as a successful innovation to humans’ lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93454545455 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35763789462 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1990291148 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259852332577 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835856567423 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642215043441 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162441787339 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490261424061 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.