It is argued that teachers should instill discpline to their students while others believe that it is a parenteral duty to do so. This essay agrees completely that teachers should enforce internationally acceptable behaviours to their students as they will be preparing them to be discipline leaders of tommorow. Further it will doscuss why it is crucial to involve parents in grooming and discplining their children.
Education does not only mean qualified academically but it involves behaviour of a person towards other people. It also prepare students for greater positions at their workplaces post qualification as character counts. Teachers have a better understanding of acceptable manners both at workplaces internationally. For example l was taught in school to greet anyone superior to you and not sitdown in someone's office unless you are told to do so.This rule applies all over you go around the globe.
I strongly agree that teachers have a great influence on children as they are seen by students as role models. Students listen their teachers more compared to their parents. For instance, Oneday I told my daughter that we are delaying going to school for some hours as I was going with her to see the physician since she was not feeling well, then she answered me that my teacher told me that you should not come to school late nomatter what happened and she agreed after I called the teacher to talk to her.
There are some conditions which affect children's behaviours.Parents may not understand that condition and start labelling the child as naughty. For example when I was doing relief teaching there was a child with autism and I assumed that her parents knew about the condition and I never talked to them about it. Oneday both parents came to me and they all started complaining about her behaviour thus when I discover they have no idea about the condition and I had to refer them to hospital for counselling and management of the condition.
However, It takes a parent who understand their own culture to instill discipline. Each household has its own rules ,norms and values which need to followed, therefore allowing teacher to instill discipline might confuse the child as the behaviour might be regarded as bad where he come from ,while on the other hand it is seen as good.Understanding each child's cultural beliefs might be a burden to a teacher. What the teacher and other members of society as crucial might not be, for example in Shona culture in Zimbabwe you are suppose to kneel down to greet anyone older that you hence in some culture you can do so whilst standing or seated.
In conclusion,teachers are the one's who suppose to instill discipline in students as they will be preparing them to be seasoned future leaders. Teachers have academic qualifications on how to instill discipline to the child compared to some parents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 24.0651302605 283% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2397.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 483.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96273291925 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87885500012 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3354358436 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230295725119 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725969235992 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359428135413 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121024466141 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229684130032 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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