The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.
The line graph illustrate the number of people living in China and India from the year 2000 and prospective population increase until 2050.
Overall, an increase in population was experienced in both India and China, however, as predicted, China will remain constant for a decade from 2020 to 2030, as it will have a gradual fall, afterwards. While, India will continue to have a growth in population up to 2050, as forecasted. Comparatively, China had a larger population from 2000, above India and will continue up to 2030, when it is predicted to decline below its counterpart.
As shown on the chart, China had a larger population in 2000, at 1250 billion people. A gradual increase of about 10% with each passing decade was witnessed. As predicted that from 2020, a steady increase will be experienced and remain unchanged up to 2030. It is forecasted that, from 2030 a slight decline in population growth will be experienced to around 1400 billion in 2050. In addition, it is predicted that the population of China will reach its peak in mid 2020s at about 1450 billion people.
On the other hand, India had a population of 1000 billion people in 2000. A significant increase of about 10% increase was witnessed. Prospectively, it will continue to increase above China in 2030, at 1450 billion people. Furthermore, it will continue to fluctuate until 2050, when it reach its peak at 1600 billion people.
Comparatively, China had a higher population which almost doubled India in 2000. Thereafter, India experienced significant increase in population growth, whilst its counterpart had a steady increase. However, these two nations will have equal population growth and China will experience a slight decline, while, India continue to rise steadily, as predicted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...until 2050. Overall, an increase in population was experienced in both India...
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Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...ntinue to fluctuate until 2050, when it reach its peak at 1600 billion people. ...
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Message: The proper name in singular (India) must be used with a third-person verb: 'continues'.
Suggestion: continues
...perience a slight decline, while, India continue to rise steadily, as predicted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, while, as for, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 290.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90045713729 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410344827586 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.07073170732 747% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1264204274 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368221497201 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150566343433 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100811196858 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260146801513 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889975055433 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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