Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results. While others believe that it is a more important to reward students who show improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern age, reward is the best way to motivate the students. Some people think those students should be rewarding which are take the best academic results. While others believe hnji to the sales of your website. that it is more important to reward students who show improvement.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that hard work is done by students to take the best results. There are probably a number of factors involved it is a right of student to get price if they do best. The chief cause might be that day and night is spended by students to the practice of study and take higher grade. Moreover, subsequent factor could be that some students are very clever in exam time they take the help from the pockets and best result is taken by clever students so this unfavorable fact could be impact on intelligent students.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of the reward to the students who show improvement Obviously there are number of positive features. The most evident would be that teachers have also know about which student is intelligent and which one is clever so teachers prace the reward only intelligent students. As a consequence, students do the more and more hard work and take best. For instance, the recent survey findings have clearly indicated that give price is the best way to motivate and improve the internal structure of students.
To conclusion, although there are good reason to reward the intelligent students who show best in study. But in opinion it is marit feature to give reward the students which show best in study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ich are take the best academic results. While others believe that it is more importan...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...elligent students. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of the reward...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...vident would be that teachers have also know about which student is intelligent and ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78388278388 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47223170121 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472527472527 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1515678855 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436482344559 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196885072545 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160485380622 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339425717127 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178016094972 0.056905535591 313% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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