Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
students who shows effort should give them reward. some people think that school should reward pubils
who get a heighest academic result whearse, some people think it is best to reward who show developement . In my opinion, I belive that the student who enhancing should have get a reward.
An icreasing number of students who get best academic merks. Many inhabitance belive that the school should honoring and reward students who get best result to make other students strive to get a good marks. Also, give the students the reward that they like will lead them to like the school. For example, recent study show in school in United Kingdom that after the students gave them rewards made other students developed to show best result and get the prize. give the students prize that they like will enhance other students to get it.
Meanwhile, other students develope to get a high score. some people wants to give the students prize due to effort. give them a prize will lead them to never to give up and develop more to get what they want, additionly, make them more exited to growth. For instance, one of the school in Riyadh had gave the students the prize and certificate beacuse they show improvements subsequntaly, that lead the puipils to gat a high score in academic result.
In conclusion, some people belive to give the student reward who get a best score, other belive who growth should give them a prize. In my opinion, who develop and growth should give them to make the don't give up.
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...and growth should give them to make the dont give up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77566539924 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26858207841 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399239543726 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6140949805 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465704592441 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226780647846 0.084324248473 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11133875978 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362024178466 0.151304729494 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109345575329 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.