Competition and co-oepration among the children has become one of the arguement topic whereas some people beleive that juvenile are taught to competetive each other instead of being coperative.This eassy will discuss both views.
On side of discussion many people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged shoulde be encouraged. The most compelling reasons for teaching children to challenge each otheros to prepare them for uncountable exam of that leads them in the progress and well performer in every fields. When there is more compeption childres, they are more likey to do hardwork and focus to win over.For instance, Offspring who compete each othes in schools exams are the one that obtained higest scores while their opponet also scores high wich has only small difference in their marks. A as result, they come up with great grades and get good job in future,
Despite the above arguments, im on the view that children learn to be cooperate beacause it teaches them to become generous and humble rather than jealousy and greedy.This lead them to become a well grown up adult in future.Although competition enhance their skills, capacity and confident to do every task,but their mind will be full of negativity and lack of patience. However, children with coordinate nature are often stay positive and help people indeed.As a result when they grow up their nature and behaviours leads them to become hardworking and successful people in future.
To Conclude, I think elder should taugh children to adopt friendlier nature and avoid competition. They can acheive their goal if they cooperate with each other by helping and learning new things from their friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17883211679 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70171859986 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.781028015 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.375 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293281596749 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130759705611 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912332213709 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17241142879 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515067444482 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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