Sports and games have paramount importance in today's hectic schedule. People have different views whether games and other outdoor activities are significant for community or these must be considered as leisure activities. According to my prospective sports and games have great importance for community.
on the one hand, a few people put forward the argument that sports and games must be taken as a recreational activities. Firstly, in these days almost everyone have sedentary life style, therefore, the best to way to recharge their batteries and relaxation is games and sports, which are done by people mostly when they are free from their work. Secondly , playing games is regarded as fun by people as they feel fresh when they play sports such as swimming and many more as per their interest. Moreover, sports not only maintain body physically healthy but also provide mentally freshness and undisturbed mind as when people play games they forget all strees and worries. Finally, most of people who want to break monotony prefer these sports and games in their spare time such as on weekends. Thus they regard sports merely leisure activities. Also., people consider it the way to spend their quality time with family and children by enjoying these games in free time.
on the other hand, according to my opinion community can get plenty of benefits from games and sports. The primary benefit is that some people have extraordinary skills for playing games, therefore, they can pursue these sports as a profession by developing these skills or hobbies. Besides this, some spots are recognized on global level and people go for watching these spots so these are entertainment source for the the public. Furthermore, it enhances the fame of players as well as boost up their confidence. Apart from it, famous sport starts fascinate young generation and encourage them to play games which would result in maintaining healthy environment in the society and eradicates the bad evils in the community. In addition to this, players get name and fame and pay back to the society. Additionally, trend of being fit also encourage young ones to playing sports which brings more healthy people in the community.
To conclude, although some people opine that sports and games should be regarded as only leisure activities yet I believe that it devote ample of benefits to society in terms of economic, entertainment. And healthy atmosphere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13819095477 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63881806552 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8652340359 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.631578947 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47368421053 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179581024144 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623899442751 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355830818723 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119975825162 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158739739495 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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