In modern life, people must have one sport activity to increase their productivity and relation with others. However, both parties of people have split whether the sport is just the way for people to occupy their free time or sport has a big influence on society. This essay will explain about two perspectives.
To begin with, it is true that sport will develop the number of relationships among people. This is happening because, in sports activity, people need rival not only to increase their skill but also to expand their experience. For example, athletes will start their career in the local region such as the countryside, village, and city so that every competition will increase their interaction among other players. Equally important, in social life, the moral value from the sports activity is that players learn about positive value such as sportive and honest.
On the other hand, sport is the reason for people to get out of their regular activity. Sometimes, people need refreshment so that they will do the activity in the outside of their safety zone. For instance, people who work in the company with high pressure and hard workload will feel bored so that some sports activities such as hiking, fishing, and swimming, contribute to release their stress. Besides, this type of sport doesn’t need other people to start so it does not influence their social life.
In conclusion, people do sport because of the sum of reasons. Sport will increase the relation if the activity plays together but people choose sport because they just want to move-up from regular activity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...n social life, the moral value from the sports activity is that players learn about po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06037735849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4617718007 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535849056604 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.025543957 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187193108345 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080711820069 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559017946621 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132509864071 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339326584025 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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