Every country always has a dream to be enormous. Some politician argues that the criteria to become a superpower nation are such as freshwater widespread to the inhabitant, energy can be distributed in their region, and the country has the capability to supply food by itself. This category can be achieved when the economy in one country remains stable. However, there are several arguments that are not just focused on the economy but other capabilities which shall be taken to support the improvement of the country.
To begin with, the highest level of the economy can prove that the country is sustained. The surplus has passed while the income is higher than the expense so that the country has managed the inflation of its Kurs. For example, since the year 2000, Indonesia enlarges the income up to 5% per year so that the value of its Kurs (rupiah) is expensive than other countries Kurs. Others example, Venezuela has a crisis in economic because many people in the country have been fired in term of the fallen of the oil price and the country is not ready to exchange the disruption because it just focuses in the economic sector. Not only focusing on the economy in which cash-flow of money can be managed by the country but also other aspects that support the development of the country such as education, farming, and energy resources.
On the other hand, there are several consents for the country to support economic progress. Firstly, the most important thing is educating people. In Findlandia, many children have a good education background from elementary to university school. This country has productive human resources. This is why this country is classified to be a developed country. Secondly, the criteria of advancement country are that people live in peace where the number of crimes can be controlled by either the government or the defense system.
In conclusion, the biggest country can be evaluated by the growth of the economy. But, the greatest economy will not achievable if the other component such as education and criminal cannot be maintained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99426934097 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65562412095 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504297994269 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4027489438 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.529411765 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100755964073 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399372356469 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528864351253 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647856059243 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044908152056 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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