Some people think students should be encouraged to begin working after they have graduated from senior high school. While others think students should attend university first and then go to work. Discuss and state your view.
Society depends on the upcoming generation and there are different schools of thoughts regarding the scholars of today. However, people opine that students should take up jobs after completing schooling, while others believe that they should complete their tertiary education and then get employed. This essay will discuss both views objectively and arrive at a logical conclusion.
Firstly, some are of the opinion that teenagers should be motivated to work after completion of senior high school education, enabling them to understand the value of money and society. One of the main reasons for students to take up employment post schooling is lack of financial stability, absence of inherent wealth pressing need to support the family, and perhaps lack of confidence to study higher. For example, there are many drop-outs from school and this could be attributed to any one of the above reasons, however, this decision could help students become street - smart at a very young stage in their lives.
Secondly, it is argued that students should continue their education at the university before being employed. The main objective of this move would be helping students to achieve white collar jobs, enhance their professional and soft skills, and live a quality life. For example, considering the educational background of political leaders, business tycoons, leading entrepreneurs have graduated from top notch business schools, and have contributed to the economy of their respective countries in a tangible manner. Hence, education is a backbone in the development of self and society,
To sum up, in my opinion higher education is absolutely necessary for day to day life and will play an instrumental role in helping individuals reach great heights while they enjoy a satisfying and rewarding life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: top-notch
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...e economy of their respective countries in a tangible manner. Hence, education is a backbone in the ...
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...m up, in my opinion higher education is absolutely necessary for day to day life and will play an in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39436619718 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76738690577 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.465518789 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.2 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256435485832 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954602071002 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735397858053 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137653232473 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689582221803 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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