Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A healthy diet is essential for proper physical and mental development of students. Although some guardians think that students should learn about the science of food and ways to prepare them, others are of the belief that more time should be spent on focusing important subjects. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints before finally giving a personal opinion.
There are numerous benefits of gaining knowledge on food. Pupils will be able to differentiate between the negative effects of consuming fast foods and the advantages of eating having a healthier diet which will aid them in leading healthier lifestyle and improve their concentration. In fact, students may also use their creativity in converting the junk foods to healthier ones. For example, in a research it was proven that replacing meat with soy gives equal amount of nutrition minus the amount of harmful fats which could lead to obesity and heart diseases in the long run. Moreover, they can also build a career as well as improve the society by creating awareness.
However, studying essential subjects also have their merits. In order to achieve good grades, school subjects are mandatory to study. These grades will in turn facilitate the students to get enrolled in prestigious educational institutions thereby leading to scoring better jobs with high paying remunerations and hence, living a comfortable and secure life.
To sum up, I firmly believe students should learn about food sciences including how to prepare them as it is vital for their overall development, which will eventually help them to concentrate more on the important subjects and create a healthy society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... the viewpoints before finally giving a personal opinion. There are numerous benefits of gain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25939849624 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70531759444 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9434094735 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272360667724 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835443202339 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904488202733 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167925657326 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112713807321 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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