Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically.Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adultlife. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Essay topics:

Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically.

Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult

life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In the present age, whether single-sex schools provide more benefits than mixed schools

has sparked much debate. Some people assert that students in single-sex schools have

better academic achievements, whereas many others argue that mixed schools offer

students better social skills for their future. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view.

Convincing arguments can be made that mixed schools provide a more comprehensive

learning environment for children. To start with, students studying at mixed schools have more

chances to communicate with members of the opposite sex. In other words, children learn

how to talk to the other gender at an early age; therefore, their social skills would certainly be

fostered. Moreover, mixed schools give students opportunities to deal with conflicts with the

other gender, which strengthens students’ problem-solving skills. For instance, when a boy

has a conflict with a girl at school, both of them must learn how to cope. This lesson must be

learned sooner or later; as a result, students benefit more if they can learn it sooner. Lastly,

mixed schools provide students with a real-life scenario where both genders co-exist.

Specifically, students are able to learn in an organic environment in which boys and girls must

know how to interact with each other.

Admittedly, single-sex schools have fewer distractions. The reason for this is if a school

only has boys or girls, students would not be distracted by members of the opposite sex at

school; hence, they can focus on their learning. Even so, these students still have access to

the other gender after school, which means in reality, they must meet the other gender anyway.

Consequently, the benefits of single-sex schools are quite limited.

In summary, I would concede that single-sex schools have some advantages. Despite

that, mixed schools certainly support students in a much better way. Overall, I am convinced

that students should go to mixed schools.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, consequently, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, even so, for instance, in summary, as a result, in other words, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48407643312 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75336844071 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541401273885 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6775941603 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379427237651 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140312974821 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828923750342 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126224494837 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709910789866 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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