Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adult brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is taught by many that adolescent period is the most enjoyable time of a person's life while some say that more happiness is achieved during adulthood even if there are more responsibilities to fulfill. While teenagers are not responsible for their financial resources I believe that adults are happier because they have their own money.
On the one hand, teenagers depend on their family particularly their financial resources. This is to say that parents provide everything for them. They go to school without thinking about their tuition fees as well as buy things they want. Adolescents enjoy life because they do not need to work to have these things. For example, when a teenager wants to buy a new smartphone they can just ask their parents and once it was purchased they become happy. However, some teens do not have family to support them financially and they need to work to meet their basic needs.
On the other hand, adults are earning and manages their own money. They can do whatever they want to do with it. This is to say that they can buy anything and go anywhere without depending on other about their finances. For example, adults can book a holiday together with their friends or purchase an item that they want regardless of the price. Adults are responsible for their own life and they need to work to sustain their needs. In my opinion, happiness is fully experienced when you are in control of your own finances.
In conclusion, people have differing views about happiness whether it is achieved during teenager years or adulthood. While adolescents do not provide their own money I believe that adults are happier because they have income.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... period is the most enjoyable time of a persons life while some say that more happiness...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88111888112 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52992264355 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5923489271 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121099085021 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492594544713 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424388445057 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948094704497 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372783795366 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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