some people think that the teenage years are the happiness times of most people 's lives.Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
Few person consider that the offspring years are the joy times of most individual's lives But also others ponder that adolescent life memorable more goodness with a lot of valuable obligations.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
It is true that juvenile life is golden period in their life.In facts,children can easily learn any new thing relate to study,outdoor activities.In addition,teenager age plays a vital role of life because it have depends on future as well as they would deciade their career.In these days,children must curious about their study that 's why they cannot aware about physical activities like running,football and so on.Moreover,they always like to introvert himself as far as they turning them into coach potatoes such as they are many time killing on social site.In couple of years,children should try find the happiness only on internet.Otherwise,
they always available on network sites that day's they have loose their happiness,fun and recreation and extra.
Moving towards,it is no doubt mature life compare to children life totally different again.But also this age person have very clear thing about what would do in their life nor they balances their personal and professional life.However,adult can easily handle any situation regarding to home either work place.After that,they always time maintain their smile with any matters.Lastly,they have determined their responsibilities.Thus,they always fulfill requriement with their family or who have always enjoy their life with a lot of entertainment,care and love.
All said and done,I reckon,kid life is memorable period in whole life but nowadays child have only found happiness on phone that's why they cannot feel real happiness in their life.When adults have full enjoyment their life while they creating new moments in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, i reckon, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55281690141 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44396438662 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.64171745 49.4020404114 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.25 106.682146367 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.7667163134 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.25 7.06120827912 528% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120817305007 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902964688867 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248225567027 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777185542348 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035372871586 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.2 13.0946893788 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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